From 5f8ed18742ab5ac09d022faaa4586d86520d4bf6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Matthias=20G=C3=BCnter?= <matthias.guenter@sbb.ch>
Date: Thu, 21 Dec 2023 13:29:53 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] rephrased according to Nick

---
 .../netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd    | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
index c15674444..f1974c5c1 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
@@ -420,24 +420,24 @@ Local train adapted for running in mountain railway lines.</xsd:documentation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="cableCar">
 				<xsd:annotation>
-					<xsd:documentation>A cableCar has few and bog cabins.</xsd:documentation>
+					<xsd:documentation>A cable car has one or two large cabins that make alternating journeys up and down.</xsd:documentation>
 				</xsd:annotation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="lift">
 				<xsd:annotation>
-					<xsd:documentation>Lift is the most general term and does also contain vertical elevators.</xsd:documentation>
+					<xsd:documentation>Lift is a vertical (or sometimes slanting) elevator with a lift cage, usually in a building. It excludes ski lifts and other cableways.</xsd:documentation>
 				</xsd:annotation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="chairLift"/>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="dragLift"/>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="paternoster">
 				<xsd:annotation>
-					<xsd:documentation>Paternoster lift is a passenger lift which consists of a chain of open compartments.</xsd:documentation>
+					<xsd:documentation>A paternoster lift is a vertical passenger lift which consists of a chain of open compartments that passengers step into as it passes.</xsd:documentation>
 				</xsd:annotation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="telecabinLink">
 				<xsd:annotation>
-					<xsd:documentation>Horizontal telecabines.</xsd:documentation>
+					<xsd:documentation>A telecabine connecting two points with no or little vertical difference.</xsd:documentation>
 				</xsd:annotation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 		</xsd:restriction>

From 97e16419c510dd7f13f69bded79fa810eb8f66c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Matthias=20G=C3=BCnter?= <matthias.guenter@sbb.ch>
Date: Thu, 21 Dec 2023 16:54:32 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update
 xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd

Co-authored-by: trurlurl <82838870+trurlurl@users.noreply.github.com>
---
 .../netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd          | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
index f1974c5c1..fa4a3710d 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_submode_version.xsd
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ Local train adapted for running in mountain railway lines.</xsd:documentation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 			<xsd:enumeration value="telecabinLink">
 				<xsd:annotation>
-					<xsd:documentation>A telecabine connecting two points with no or little vertical difference.</xsd:documentation>
+					<xsd:documentation>A telecabin connecting two points with no or little vertical difference.</xsd:documentation>
 				</xsd:annotation>
 			</xsd:enumeration>
 		</xsd:restriction>