From 7ba5aba7a53afcd962d6a459afa0c0824374094c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Seth Ladd <sethladd@google.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Nov 2015 11:21:33 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update wording around delegating

---
 tutorial.md | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tutorial.md b/tutorial.md
index 25aaafea18..b108b86d5b 100644
--- a/tutorial.md
+++ b/tutorial.md
@@ -322,10 +322,11 @@ class _CounterState extends State<Counter> {
 }
 ```
 
-Notice how Counter now delegates responsibility for incrementing and displaying
-the counter value down to CounterIncrementor and CounterDisplay, respectively.
-Although the net result is the same as the previous example, the delegation of
-responsibility allows greater complexity to be encapsulated in the delegated
+Notice how we created two new stateless components, cleaning separating
+the concerns of _displaying_ the counter (CounterDisplay) and _changing_
+the counter (CounterIncrementor).
+Although the net result is the same as the previous example, the separation of
+responsibility allows greater complexity to be encapsulated in the individual
 components, while maintaining simplicity in the parent.
 
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