@kpettinga under Opportunity the second sentence should change to, "In order to deliver better services to that community, and clarify the services it provides, the City government worked with Code for America to define an ownable look and feel for all of its strategies and actions."
Could "Process" that is on it's own in the light green bar be moved so it's with the associated paragraph?
Could the "Before" and "After" for the trees be in the same blue as the bars and be moved closer in to align with the paragraph above? The text "Oakland's tree, before and after" in the green section below the trees might be redundant and unnecessary
@kpettinga under Opportunity the second sentence should change to, "In order to deliver better services to that community, and clarify the services it provides, the City government worked with Code for America to define an ownable look and feel for all of its strategies and actions."
Could "Process" that is on it's own in the light green bar be moved so it's with the associated paragraph?
Could the "Before" and "After" for the trees be in the same blue as the bars and be moved closer in to align with the paragraph above? The text "Oakland's tree, before and after" in the green section below the trees might be redundant and unnecessary