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* Updated copyright year * Updated versions on links to style guides * Removed statement about providing DocBook guidance
…link Fixes #409 and other required repairs.
…date daobrien/416 chris wright update
Applied various fixes for 6.0
* First batch of updates * Remaining enhancements
* First changes for Enhancements 2 * Adding next batch of enhancements * Added further enhancements * Implemented fixes from review
* Adding snippet guidance Part 1 * Further enhancements to 6.0 * Fixes to implement feedback * Further fixes * Update to implement Fernando's feedback * Adding addressing of issue 399 to the scope * Implemented review comments
* Added audience, new in this release, fix for 'like' entry * Minor fixes
Revert addition of audience section
A small subsection on when and when not to use captions and callouts.
Addresses #424 Add info on using captions.
…dianet Fixes #356. Removes big RH logo from centre of page.
Added example for 'unset'
update preface.xml to add in audience file and resolve issue #408
* Final update to release notes for 6.0 * Updated publication month
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| <entry> To create another administrator account, click <guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem> on the <guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem> menu. <emphasis>OR</emphasis> To set privileges for another administrator, click <guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem> on the <guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem> menu. </entry> | ||
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| To create another administrator account, click <guimenuitem>New</guimenuitem> on the <guimenuitem>File</guimenuitem> menu. |
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@julian-cable This wording seems a little odd to me. Wouldn't we normally say "..., click File --->New..."?
I don't think this is critical, but it might be worth adding an example of this wording in a future edition of the style guide.
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| Use the utility to run activities and to save your settings (if the utility does both functions). | ||
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| <emphasis>Or:</emphasis> Use the utility to run activities, and then when you are done, save your settings (if the process consists of two separate steps, of which the utility does only one). |
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| <emphasis>Or:</emphasis> Use the utility to run activities, and then when you are done, save your settings (if the process consists of two separate steps, of which the utility does only one). | |
| <emphasis>Or:</emphasis> Use the utility to run activities, and then when you are done, save your settings (if the process consists of two separate steps, of which the utility does only one). |
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Again, we might make an issue against a future edition. The phrase "when you are done" bit here is extraneous. "...activities, and then save..."
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@julian-cable I left a couple of comments that we might want to add as issues for the next release. I don't think they are critical enough to circle back around during this release process. Please review and resolve or create issues if you agree, then I think we can proceed with the merge.
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