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10 changes: 5 additions & 5 deletions source/quickinstallationguide/qig.rst
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Operating System
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Using the CentOS 7.9.2009 minmal x86_64 install ISO, you'll need to install
Using the CentOS 7.9.2009 minimal x86_64 install ISO, you'll need to install
CentOS 7 on your hardware. The defaults will generally be acceptable for this
installation - but make sure to configure IP address/parameters so that you can later install needed
packages from internet. Later, we will change the network configuration as needed.
packages from the internet. Later, we will change the network configuration as needed.
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I am not an English speaker but isn't it either internet or the Internet ? (note the capitalisation)

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I'm an English speaker, and it would be "the internet" or "the Internet". English isn't a single language though.

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@bradh, so capitalisation is optional if the article is used?

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Nouns (other than pronouns) are not usually capitalised.

Seriously though, its not a big deal. The only thing I was trying to do in this PR was fix the spelling mistake. I can back out the rest of it.

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no, don´t bother I'll merge


Once this installation is complete, you'll want to gain access to your
server - through SSH.
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# yum -y install mysql-connector-python

Please note that the previously required ``mysql-connector-java`` library is now bundled with CloudStack
Management server and is no more required to be installed separately.
Management server and is no longer required to be installed separately.

Installation
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# yum -y install cloudstack-management

CloudStack |version| requires Java 11 JRE. Installing the management server
will automatically install Java 11, but it's good to explicitly confirm that the Java 11
will automatically install Java 11, but it's good to explicitly confirm that Java 11
is the selected/active one (in case you had a previous Java version already installed):

.. parsed-literal::

$ alternatives --config java

Make sure that Java 11 is the chosen one.
Make sure that Java 11 is selected.
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I kind of like the chosen one ;)


With the application itself installed we can now setup the database, we'll do
that with the following command and options:
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