I started following your tutorial (looks really useful so far btw!) and while trying to find the installation instructions, I saw a link to the offical docs in the introduction.
Upon following them, I landed at https://docs.jj-vcs.dev/v0.13.0/tutorial/ which looked legit, except some of the commands didn't work.
Specifically, the shell completion command has changed from (e.g.) jj util completion --fish | source to jj util completion fish | source.
I assume there are other differences, which might be confusing for new users.